My Inquiry-Based-Essay, Titled ” What are the causes of depression, and how is it affecting the lives of people in modern society?”. Since this is second writing, I think I improved so much faster and efficiently. My theory of writing has changed dramatically and has helped change me as a person and in my writing. With this improvement, I can always look back this of a major improvement to push me whenever I don’t myself. Personal, I think it looks good when I was writing this essay. Which got me there when I asked others to read over my essay, which made it better. I just wish it was perfect, but nothing is ever perfect and we must always have flaws. My Inquiry-Based-Essay, I wrote about “what are the causes of depression, and how is it affecting lives of people in modern society?” Depression can be caused by many things such as serious of events/ traumatic events in that persons life. There are also simples things that cause depression which is social media, body shaming, puberty, and has a serious effect on the young adults. As a conclusion, I want to bring awareness for depression, and we should limit our selves from the media and should focus on ourselves. Setting long and short term goals so we can stay focus in what’s really important to us.
This is my Inquiry-based-essay
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